Ok, since you asked to tell you if there were any mistakes, here goes.
Never do backseat narration in margin notes. This is both unnecessary and highly disrespectful to the author; by doing so, you undermine their decision to communicate intention through visuals alone. If you want to point our...
I've seen this tired argument so many times, and the most curious thing is that it never comes from people who receive their degrees in linguistics and spend years living in the countries whose languages they study, having plenty of firsthand contact with their cultures. Really makes you think...
I'd like to address this. The difference is clearly not so fundamental to affect the outcome.
In one case things proactively get dumbed down and aligned with the aesthetic sensibilities of the general populace by the IP holder to maximize profit. It usually does because the industry has largely...
@Swezed
Title: "Wasn't" (it's a verb, verbs are always capitalized in titles).
Page 7: Was it supposed to be five hours? Were there more than sixty students in Yatora's class?
Page 15: "Choices" is plural and is to be followed by a plural verb.
Page 21: Is it Nekoshiki or Nekoyashiki? You...
@jdjohndoe13
Actually that was me with the instructions.
But back to your question, the first time usually works better in the evening because if the day was leading up to it, both of you will be way too agitated to fall asleep anyway. Up to mid-twenties I found it very hard to fall asleep...