This felt like it was 5 whole chapters squished into one clusterfuck of a chapter that doesn't fucking resolve the main conflict. I would have been fine if they didn't end up together, because at least that is an actual fucking ending and not a confusing mess that I think has two multi year...
Jesus I've seen fanfic written by 12 year olds that have better stories than this. Them being step siblings isn't even the worst part, the worst part is all of the unnecessary melodrama and reverse deus ex machina where a new story element is thrown in for drama. And what pisses me off most is...