On page 6 Ryuuichi says the watch costed $6,000, and then Icchan exclaims "sixty", might want to fix whatever is wrong there. (Also are these said in USD or yen? Though even if the amount is translated and the exclamation isn't then it'd still be off cause that'd be like 600k-1m yen not 60k)
Sure, but it's irrational and clueless to the point of absurdity, especially for a story that is trying to be an at least somewhat fairly grounded crime drama. Within the realm of her cluelessness and jealousy, it still doesn't make sense in the story for her to just accept what he's saying and...
Desperately wanting a series like this to do proper world building and build up instead of just jumping directly to "humanity losing a huge war, need a diplomatic marriage for peace for some reason, marry her off, also here's the Demon King's subordinates". Like pleeeeeeeeease, anything to make...
Yeah what I'm saying is that this has the airs of a yandere story but just doesn't feel like one. It's not toxic yuri at all but would be better if it was
I feel like when you have a setup like this, a stalker taking advantage of someone who is overworked essentially, you gotta go in on the actual subject matter, but this one just constantly diverts with the comedy. "Oh I've got a secret she can never know about and look how spooky the shading...
Btw page 9 should have "We didn't found any trace of camps or shipwreks from survivors" -> "We didn't find any trace of camps or shipwrecks from survivors", and "in" -> "on" for the line right before it
Yeah definitely
Also @mbiii15 the chapter 1 you uploaded is both chapter 1 and chapter 2, while the chapter 2 you uploaded is chapter 3, and the chapter 3 you uploaded is chapters 4 and 5. Would do well do split them up properly and set their chapters numbers properly.