Recent content by Otcgamer1

Keep it up bro...

Yeah I read a lot of MTL and 3-3.5/5 translated stuff from webnovel, maybe I just shaped my work like that. Thank you for pointing that out.

You should also try writing your own work, or design your own comic. It really helps..

Yes, I will fix that... My first language is not english so it's hard for me to get the flow right.. thanks a lot for the advice

Yes that would help improve the overall flow. Thanks a lot and sorry for not replying, I was busy due to personal reasons..

Thanks... I will change those parts and see if that works out.. thanks really man, I was loo Yeah if I do that the characters will feel more real and will also help the readers immerse into the scene.. thanks a lot for the idea

Thanks... I will change those parts and see if that works out.. thanks really man, I was losing

Not sure about that, I have never experienced such things so I don't know how to write about them to make it seem as real as possible

Just read it till chapter 32, It started of as a fairly good one but the story does not follow any logic at all.

It is probably the adaptation of the novel, 'Gamers of/from the Underworld.' The novel was great in terms of storyline so a lot to expect from the manhua.

Who is my boss, as in status and power? Is he a noble? Because it's a fantasy, so nobility will exist. As my boss is a slave trader, he is ought to be a very powerful and we'll connected man to be trading till now. Who is the MC as in strength and status?

What is my background? Financial status? Connections?

I do not know any professional terms about writing. The work you have posted is great. When I first read the first line I felt not so interested but after reading the entire post it feels cool. It draws your attention in slowly but has a good grip.

Thanks. It is a complete chapter, though I am trying to edit the entire novel(only 23 chapters and some 30000 words) to make it more smooth in transitions and stuff.

Hey guys, can you give me any opinions on this: Chapter 10: Dolonde, Land of Elves. The elf, who was at S+ rank asked Xior, through telepathy, “Who are you?!! What have you done!!!” in a way which indicated that she was barely suppressing her anger. Xior replied, “I am a being far different...