@gomichandesu
Thank you for sharing your story. I can't imagine how difficult it is to do so, even on the internet. Good on you for working through it as much as it seems you have. I hope you are able to one day get to the point that you're able to feel comfortable enough to talk to your family...
The writing looks stupid. So many ways for the truth to come out, but none of it does. Why does the MC say nothing? Why does the girl say nothing? What happened to the evidence? The phone? What the heck are the cops doing? Why isn't anyone mentioning how weird the girl was acting earlier? This...
@AnimeaddictionIV
Like I said, I'm not really knocking you (you're the translator, yes?). Just pointing out that the translation really is rough, that there are errors, and that some of the translations don't match what's being said at all. Like I mentioned, you never claimed for it to be...
Translation on page 13 is wrong. Decent guess at what was probably being said, but it's not really that close.
It doesn't say: "I have a sneaky suspicion 'GOD' had a hand in this meeting. You're really having fun at my expense, aren't you?"
It says: "What's with this incredibly unpleasant...
Oh hey, I was looking for something with a premise like this a few years ago. Didn't find anything satisfactory, this one looks a lot more like my speed!
Open ended ending. Done on purpose, no doubt. The reader can decide how things went on their own. Not entirely a big fan of these types of endings, but I can respect them.
My head canon for this is that she goes to the police and tells them she killed her dad by turning invisible, but they...
The translation is missing a lot, but I guess that's expected from a double translation using an auto-translator. I don't know whether the Spanish translation is wrong or if that much is just being lost in translating it twice. Maybe it would be better to translate it directly from Japanese...
@boag
I don't think I'm quite at the same point as you yet, but I do agree the story isn't exactly the best. I can usually ignore a bit of roughness to a degree, but this sorta stuff just gets me more than anything else.
Also, I did reply with a lot of things he could be doing instead of...
@Kaarme
@boag
Not going to bother with individual responses since it doesn't seem you guys are replying to me specifically despite tagging me, or are otherwise putting a lot of words into my mouth.
I said he was making excuses for others, he's going around saying that he shouldn't go around...
The MC is pissing me off. He's making so many excuses for other people and for his own inaction. I have no idea how he's supposed to be a good king if his thinking is as shallow as he's shown thus far. It would be one thing if he was supposed to be an innocent kid, but he's reincarnated and has...
That baby chicken dying gets to me.
I had a little chick as a kid. A rat came killed it. Didn't see it since my grandma didn't want me to, but apparently the little thing fought to the death and took the rat out with it.
I hate rats with a passion to this day. Fuck rats.