I'm sure there's a great 100-200 chapter story somewhere in between this 456 work.
It's wholesome, it's fine, it has problems and strenghts
It's kinda calm and doesn't really have a point, you're just watching a couple's life
It's way too insistent in painting domestic violence as funny and...
MC is too much for me, every last thing he complaints about her is his fault.
Bro, fucking talk to your wife, she always tells you what she wants and what hurts her, it's not that hard
Lynette's backstory must be one of the most stupid things i've read in a while
What kund of braindead moron buys a 7 year old extra rare super expensive mixed race elf to make her fight to the dead with a monster
This story has landmarks that wants to hit but has absolutely no idea how to...