When the old man actually looks like an old man for once. Am I glad I don’t have to remind myself that they’re parent-daughter and not freaking siblings.
@kawaii123456 Idk, maybe the idea of having a sister in general? She’s the only daughter of her family, and her parents are old enough to be her grandparents. Then the only people around her closer to her age are servants or maybe other schoolchildren. But with a sister she can maybe be herself...
Main character feels less than one dimensional. Idk if it’s because the author is trying to make her look meek, but it’s possible while not making her not look like she doesn’t think. Maybe display more of her thoughts, add a psychological aspect. Not just make her think “I’m scared. He’s scary...