The official website is a much better reading experience due to the "chapters" being a single page.
I appreciate learning about this story due to this page on Mangadex, binged the whole thing its very well written and illustrated.
I thought it was going to have some potential, but it takes for granted that we find the daughter charming. She has barely any screen time and its the MC that's always the forefront of the scene instead of any relationships.
That's not even mentioning the many other problems.
This manga is sort of like cotton candy, every bite just sort of disappears in your mouth and that can be enjoyable to some, but you shouldn't expect anything more. Still an enjoyable treat if you're ok with that.
I think I've had my fill and perhaps want more than its able to give.
I think you did a decent job, but be careful about the unwritten etiquette. Commenters can be feisty to put it lightly.
You did a good job translating, no problems with grammar and mostly flowed nicely.
I'm not seeing much hope for this series. Its got all the tropes, slaves, evil religion, demis on the backfoot, getting along with random creatures, and having equipment he shouldn't have, breakneck pacing, etc. The synopsis feels like a lie so far.