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    Little Robot

    I don't know why but I couldn't stop crying at the end, I thought the little robot was gonna save it's self in the last second but it cared only of saving the girl in the box and in doing so died with her. It's a beautiful and sad story but it felt more like a poem to me, nevertheless it made...
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    A story I wrote. Title: The Eternal Towers - Tropaion

    At the moment I'm working with both you and fei's (Rhenn) feedback to edit and correct all of the mistakes I made on chapter 0 and use all I learnt to work on Chapter 1. I may be new at this but I'll work hard, so I hope you'll be able to give me more advice later on as I get better. Thank you...
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    A story I wrote. Title: The Eternal Towers - Tropaion

    Thank you very much for the feedback, this is my first story and I'm still learning but I'll do my best to improve and I'll take all your advice, everyone's too heart. Thank you very much. -JY
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    A story I wrote. Title: The Eternal Towers - Tropaion

    The part where you mentioned ( show them rather than tell them ). It's really interesting and I haven't thought of it before, I'm working on chapter 1 right now and hopefully you'll give me some more feedback later 😊 I really do appreciate your help Fei. -JY
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    A story I wrote. Title: The Eternal Towers - Tropaion

    Thank you so much for the feedback and advice, it was really easy for me to understand how you broke everything down and I see that I have a lot of work to do. I'll do my very best to live up to everyone's expectations. Thank you again for the help. -JY
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    A story I wrote. Title: The Eternal Towers - Tropaion

    It's my first time writing a book so I'm kinda new to this but I hope you enjoy it and if you have any criticism and or opinions, I'll be happy to listen. Seeing that this is my first time, I would love the feedback to improve my writing skills. Thank you for reading 😁 - JY.
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    A story I wrote. Title: The Eternal Towers - Tropaion

    Chapter 0 - The Towers I saw as my friend kneeling over me crying, all I could think about was her “get up... please” she yelled. Me “ ... “ Screaming at the top of her voice (lu!?) She Started to Break down. I saw her face, some how I can tell what she was thinking “he protected me but I...
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    LHTranslation

    Thank you for translating some of my favorite manga 💕
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    I paid someone on fiverr too turn my microphone into a waifu

    An old Deviant I love. Dev-19 https://www.deviantart.com/dav-19/art/KitKat-809673013
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