Exactly my thoughts, this is WAY too linear at the moment for the usual stuff. I envision a break up of this current situation, yet another move toward the artist or someone in between then and now. Maybe a meddling of the other meeting of parents/misunderstandings with the young guy there. This...
That was genuinely so straight forward and complete I too am shocked lol. All in one chapter, learned her feelings and put it in practice immediately. lmfao
My fave parts of this story are the moments where it is how the help he gets in this issue is all just repaying good karma he or his family did for others.
"But I have these god like powers", the fact she questions it means she isn't a "god". I really enjoyed that piece from her husband tbh. Can view it as washing over the real thought, but he isn't wrong.