Honestlly without it ending like it did I would have just moved on and forgot about it, but now at least it left an impression. I won't be reading more but it was a freak occurance that i read this chapter in the first place. Overall found this fine for a oneshot.
@Ipappi lol
@Silverfox76 If all the people who had negative stuff to say just moved on we would be full of 10 point series on this website and reviews would be pointless. I just skimmed through the comments but most people stated their reasons for disliking the story so i don't think it was a problem.
If...
Haven't read ywt but wanted to comment how funny I found it that he died to a beast in our world and went to fight monsters in the other one without getting a power.
Tho I'm sure he will get something
@UnknownSaint111 this might be just how i was seeing it but the story for me was about him going through this state and then eventually falling into his role as he was before.. It would be normal to panic when you get transferred to a world of violence out of nowhere and he acknowledged that he...
@chikikuto its been so long since i dropped this but i keep getting replies... i'll quote MC a moment: "if it wasn't for Ning Er i wouldn't even think about doing it, it's just too dangerous". He is legitimately putting his life on the line here.
I guess everyone can interpret his character...
@De_Blois Honestly, I'm fine with the twins in this one because they simply lack a lot of the information to make a proper judgement. What is annoying is the emperor line who simply refuse to talk to them consistantly. Like he didn't even ask them what was wrong and after that didn't question...