As someone said please get a good story board before you start doing the panels. It will do wonders. It feels also like for a few shots you tried to get more creative but also impatient which showed in the art. Also the story is still missing its actual plot. I don't think this feels like a...
Well I at least havent rated yet but so far if I'm being 100% honest the story and art is rough. Its one of those cases where I get what the premise or overall idea is at least i think so by this 2nd chapter but not much substance is really here. It feels like tonal whiplash across these 2...