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Found blacks minding their own business and instigates a fight. Story is honestly already kinda basic and the artstyle a bit too heavy on the lineweight but this scene lowers my opinion of it a bit more

This feels like a conflict of social skills. If Yoru full explained everything, its possible that Sumire wouldn't be so adamant about protecting the parents. Also Mimosa killed Sumire's family, likely because of SW. She could have withheld that information until afterwards and tried to also get...

Something must have happened to the old man to speed up his transformation. We see now around 10 years prior he looked pretty fine and his friend here didn't look much more progressed than he currently is. The old man was taking care of the little girl for around 10 years too and looked about...

I get why she did it, but it would have been significantly better for both of them if she mercy killed him first. She had time to as well

Something doesnt seem right here. So you mean the little girl could survive 10 years off eating End humans and show no physical changes, the old man probably a lot longer, and yet these guy are saying they cant get much from end humans? Either they dont know or they are lying. Even if there is...

Definitely hoping the AI link caused some changes too her. Like made her smarter or able to process more things at a time.

Hazard went into the Oguri Cap stance

As someone said please get a good story board before you start doing the panels. It will do wonders. It feels also like for a few shots you tried to get more creative but also impatient which showed in the art. Also the story is still missing its actual plot. I don't think this feels like a...

Well I at least havent rated yet but so far if I'm being 100% honest the story and art is rough. Its one of those cases where I get what the premise or overall idea is at least i think so by this 2nd chapter but not much substance is really here. It feels like tonal whiplash across these 2...