Byakuda no Hanamuko - Vol. 2 Ch. 9

[tylerdurden_narator]

Sumpah,gua gak bakal nyangka bakal plot twist kayak gini

 

[Babymech2]

What's the clunky part I'll try to fix it, if you think I made mistake on the order of the pages or translation please feel free to check the raws and then tell me where did I go wrong

I'm not saying anything needs to be fact checked against raws, it's just that people obviously don't say "My dear you, don't fall into the category of a friend" or "blood isn't stopping" when they're bleeding...

 

[asphyxiav2]

I'm not saying anything needs to be fact checked against raws, it's just that people obviously don't say "My dear you, don't fall into the category of a friend" or "blood isn't stopping" when they're bleeding...

I'm trying to use an alternative for deep japanese words that fits on the context of the sentence because byakuya is using Edo period japanese from time to time. Further more, bleeding and blood ain't the same, he definitely said "chi ga" not "shukketsu ga" that's why I translated it as the blood isn't stopping.

 

[Babymech2]

I'm trying to use an alternative for deep japanese words that fits on the context of the sentence because byakuya is using Edo period japanese from time to time. Further more, bleeding and blood ain't the same, he definitely said "chi ga" not "shukketsu ga" that's why I translated it as the blood isn't stopping.

Well yeah. Japanese people say chi ga dete imasu when an English speaker would normally say I'm bleeding... And a native speaker would at least say 'the blood', not blood in general (and even more likely 'the bleeding'). I still get the meaning and appreciate the work, but it's a little clunky, sorry.

 

[Rift-]

Good thing I have protanopia because I see 0 red flags

 

[ysil69]

Aww she loves him sooo much. That's nice.

 

[AutoRedux]

Am I getting dumber or is this chapter sort of a mess? The translation's pretty clunky (sorry), but what's with this scene progression? While they bring the one guy to the nurse the two girls get changed out of their yukata, have a heart to heart, and go eat ramen all while the MC is still at the nurse? (Not to mention the - I guess - flashback to her surveillance life, which is jammed in there to make things less clear)

Brochacho is cursed with being unlucky. Sakuya prevented divine messengers from getting near him to break his curse so she could have him all to herself.

With Byakuda taking over her body, divine messengers can now attempt to break his curse.

It's not the TL's fault. It's the way the author laid the chapter out.

 

[AutoRedux]

What's the clunky part I'll try to fix it, if you think I made mistake on the order of the pages or translation please feel free to check the raws and then tell me where did I go wrong

It's not you. It's the way the author laid the chapter out. Took me a couple of run throughs to understand what was happening as well.

 

[petertitan99999]

 

[Forikorder]

So before she got her bod taken she wanted him to have bad luck forever? is that the REAL deal she made with the snake lady? Damn. They both are yandere.

i dont get the play here, i can get wanting him to be misfortune so he keeps relying on her, but whats the point if it means dieing?

or is she still awake inside and is happy getting to watch?

 

[asphyxiav2]

i dont get the play here, i can get wanting him to be misfortune so he keeps relying on her, but whats the point if it means dieing?

or is she still awake inside and is happy getting to watch?

Nope, what the nurse probably means is she's the one preventing the other divine messengers to get into contact with him that's why when she died byakuya took over body. This is just my speculation tho but this question might get a clarification in the next chapter.

 

[MLGSwagmaster64]

If shits happen we can all migrate my scanlation on that certain manga site I already have all the perms for all my series

Edit: join my discord if you want to get updated.

I thank you for this translation, like this is so good. I wonder if they will have sakuya ever or nah. I do hope she still there

 

[MightFriedRice]

Damn, thanks for translating btw

 

[BREAD123]

...need

 

[TheAnikage]

this is just so damn good, tftc

 

[Deabonethefish]

oh god I love myself a yandere

 

[KuroViLolitannia]

Girl flag so red I thought it is China

 

[micz7ryu]

I don’t mind this type of Yandere tbh.

 

[skymadrid]

This manga gets crazier and interesting at the same time. Damn

 

[Friendly-Sentence710]

oh god I love myself a yandere

Its nice to have someone who loves you just for being you.
Dude she is literally planning to sew you together.
No relationship is perfect.