Hazukashi-souna Kao de Oppai Misete Moraitai: Sekimen Oppai Anthology - Ch. 8

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Mf really straight up sexually assaulted his crush lmao.
I swear some author really make up the most stupid way of proceeding with a relationship. Yeah titty grope out of nowhere, that will make them happy!
Its a anthology were all chapters are all self-contained stories, some might be serialized (like Peter Grill) but what the fuck did you expected the author to do? Considering the title is "Show Me Your Boobies and Look Embarrassed!" and they have about 15 pages to tell a entire story ...
 
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Its a anthology were all chapters are all self-contained stories, some might be serialized (like Peter Grill) but what the fuck did you expected the author to do? Considering the title is "Show Me Your Boobies and Look Embarrassed!" and they have about 15 pages to tell a entire story ...
Literally do anything other than sudden sexual assault. Take a look at the other chapters, at least those were lucky pervert moment or the story flow much better, even if it's 15-20 pages long story.


Stop accepting trash story, have some standard, even in boobie ecchi genre.
 
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Literally do anything other than sudden sexual assault.

The thing is that its perfectly fine not not like this type of content, its not for everyone but its for someone, if you dont like it then just dont read it and I know in a anthology this can be a problem since I read one about monster girls (I think it was even the one with Peter Grill) that had a very dark story that was very out of tone with the rest, it kinda comes with the territory of having a bunch of oneshoots collected in a book.

Also you kinda acting like the Twitteractivits and the M'lady Fedora ... we can tell by her reaction she had no problem with that, after all she laughed because she slipped and fallen ... it follows the kind "manga logic" that really doesnt exist, we know that. I dont see this as extreme content, its not like her forced himself and the usage of "sexual assult" on this is very overblown.
 
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The thing is that its perfectly fine not not like this type of content, its not for everyone but its for someone, if you dont like it then just dont read it and I know in a anthology this can be a problem since I read one about monster girls (I think it was even the one with Peter Grill) that had a very dark story that was very out of tone with the rest, it kinda comes with the territory of having a bunch of oneshoots collected in a book.

Also you kinda acting like the Twitteractivits and the M'lady Fedora ... we can tell by her reaction she had no problem with that, after all she laughed because she slipped and fallen ... it follows the kind "manga logic" that really doesnt exist, we know that. I dont see this as extreme content, its not like her forced himself and the usage of "sexual assult" on this is very overblown.
"don't like it then don't read it"
The classic useless suggestion. Why is it so hard for you people to take criticism on shit writing? Stop normalizing shit writing. If other authors can make believable, simple erotic stories, then why can't this author do the same?
I'm not criticizing this to defend her. I read doujins that women get raped ffs, who fucking cares, they are fictions. But shit writing deserves to be called out.
Like what on god's earth does making him suddenly sexually assault her is a good writing? You tell me. Literally, nothing else happen in between, and suddenly he went and grope her chest. ?????? Does that make any sense to you? Is that romantic somehow?
 

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