Rent a milf - Ch. 2 - Rent 2

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wow i just checked on what the author has worked on besides this one and wowie, now i'm sorry to be blunt about this but now the writing makes sense, their last work before this one (Biden vs Obama) it was very clear this author wasn't ever the type to write something remotely serious (but ofc i could be wrong maybe they haven't done it yet) and that this manga story's is mainly be "stupid but funny", and only time will tell whether that's good or bad but so far 2 chs in (imo) it does hit off pretty funny, the dialogue (again imo) was pretty funny to read + the extraTHICCC art makes this a pretty nice read!
all in all i'm sold for this manga, thank you for the ch! (and thanks to anyone that cared to read all this)
 
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He cooked you ngl
Lmao thanks for tagging me, I had no idea the author quoted me. If you're reading me, you can get as defensive as you want, but it won't make your comic any better. Learning to draw comics is a long and arduous path, and I personally put this time on my other passions.
Regarding your works, let's only take one aspect for example. Composition. Like other commenters remarked, the fact your female character has more than half of her panels zoomed on her behind is absolutely silly. So maybe rather than rushing to self-publish and then get angry at criticism, get yourself some learning resources (books, drawing courses, drawing clubs) and acquire the technical skills needed.
 
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Art is good plot is terrible but it's funny and the art carries it so I'll read it until it becomes unbearable
 
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Sheesh author, that last page.

And did you really draw that infamous Boruto face on MC? LOL

Well, at least he got the 1k and a (hot) teacher to train him. I expect her to teach him some Street Fighter moves.
 
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I wish every artist responded like you to haters, your manga isn't a masterpiece, yes, but you started it and put it out, learned the craft and had the balls to see other people opinions.
 
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Gex?! Now we're talking. Haven't played that in almost 30 years. Before "Netflix and Chill", it was Gex and... you can fill in the rest.
 

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