Dex-chan lover
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- Sep 12, 2019
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I wish there were more development with characters like the lady he saved from being a monster and the whole clan of assassins he unpetrified.
Like, we got a brief aknowledgement that they were saved and now they are under his control doing stuff but we don't know how many they are, what is their backstory, their names or anything like that.
And even if the backstory eventually comes, It would be better if it was shown before they started acting, it contextualizes just why they act like they act instead of being just obvious deus ex machinas for the author to use when needed.
Also, I know this one is just me, but I would prefer the main character would not be so oblivious to everything going on around him.
Like, we got a brief aknowledgement that they were saved and now they are under his control doing stuff but we don't know how many they are, what is their backstory, their names or anything like that.
And even if the backstory eventually comes, It would be better if it was shown before they started acting, it contextualizes just why they act like they act instead of being just obvious deus ex machinas for the author to use when needed.
Also, I know this one is just me, but I would prefer the main character would not be so oblivious to everything going on around him.