Gokuaku Reijou ~Reijou ni Tensei shita Saikyou Rouhei wa Skill "Madan" de Musou suru~ - Ch. 2

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This is the first time I haven’t really felt a unique connection with the story. I’m not sure why. With my other translations, I usually feel a special kind of fondness, but this one just feels different.

That said, it’s not like I’m going to drop it. Maybe this will Change in the future, I don't know
 
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Very cute tho. I wonder if she get married to man or stay single forever. Thank you for the upload and translation!
 
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This is the first time I haven’t really felt a unique connection with the story. I’m not sure why. With my other translations, I usually feel a special kind of fondness, but this one just feels different.

That said, it’s not like I’m going to drop it. Maybe this will Change in the future, I don't know
Worry do not mate, do what you feel, scansubs is a hobby, if you do not like translating this then drop and leave the spot open to someone else to pick up. Is completely fine and understandable.

Said that, thank you for the update.
 
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Gun designs are all over the place. I prefer the dual flintlock design tbh. Makes the "magic" part of her power stand out more.

Yankee-styled ojousama is hitting my funny bone in the right way. TL did a great job giving her a distinct personality in her words :thumbsup:
 
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Yeah. The art style has its disconnect.
And the storytelling is messy.
I just hope this story doesn't jump the shark like the Gun-otaku story.
 
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This is the first time I haven’t really felt a unique connection with the story. I’m not sure why. With my other translations, I usually feel a special kind of fondness, but this one just feels different.

That said, it’s not like I’m going to drop it. Maybe this will Change in the future, I don't know
Although it would be sad if you did drop it. It is ultimately your own decision to make.

The scans you do are great BTW love the dark elf and insect magical girl ones!

Keep up the good work!



Now about this manga, I like the mc, terrifying and knowing what she wants and being against villainy. Also the page with the wing looks amazing. As the wings are hands. Like she's being cradled by the Goddess.
 
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This is the first time I haven’t really felt a unique connection with the story. I’m not sure why. With my other translations, I usually feel a special kind of fondness, but this one just feels different.

Hm...maybe it's because the lack of emotional connection this MC has compared with the other works you've translated.

Right now, the MC just feels like a Mary Sue dropped in a classic reincarnation plot—someone died with regrets and was reborn and now everything is going perfectly in their way. It's only been 2 chapters, but she's already pretty much taken over her household and has overpowered and subordinated an entire merchant guild despite still being a child. All the adults treat her like she's a grown up too, with the maids listening to her orders first and her father even willing to relinquish the head of household title to her.

The story mentioned in Chapter 1 about how pre-reincarnation MC was blind and that he couldn't protect someone important to them, but the author glossed over that, did a time skip, and focused more on the action bits. There was barely any panels focusing on MC really bonding with their new family for readers to get attached.

Compared to a story like "My Heart is an Old Man", this one feels much more fast paced that it's hard to find something to connect to yet unless you're a big fan of OP protagonists pubstomping all their problems away while their friends and family unquestionably support them from the sidelines.

Not saying that this story can't get better later on, just that the other stories you've translated had better hooks than this one.
 
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Well, forgot bout this one xD.
It is interesting tho.
Thanks for the chapter ^^
 
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Why do I get the "this got axe'd" vibes in the chapter... I hope im wrong.. :notlikethis:
 

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