Though I May Be a Villainess, I'll Show You I Can Obtain Happiness! - Vol. 13 Ch. 4 - Because the Heroine was Two-Faced

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Once again it misses the mark but for some reason I don't mind the toothache it gave me with all its sweetness.

Thank you for your work!
 
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Generic, and barely fit the anthology aside (kinda used to it now, cause many stories ended up like this)

It's interesting to see another kind of take for "Reincarnated person's action accidentally/unintentionally cause butterfly effect", tho this is simple yet well-done take on that.
 
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Seems I accidentally made the story more interesting for myself by mixing up Flora and Muriel in the initial bullying scene, meaning during my read Muriel was the heroine and Flora just replaced Deirde as the villainess, making the twist at the end a bit more surprising considering the title and beginning synopsis.
 
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And another one where the author doesn't understand the assignment.

At this point, they should just call the series, "I'll show you I can obtain happiness".
I dunno. It’s clearly stated that the MC was reincarnated as the villainess and just actively avoided the plot, and the “heroine” was also clearly a reincarnator as well, trying to force the plot forward using someone else. This one seems like a pretty standard villainess story crammed into a short story.
 
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I can see how if this story were to be fleshed out, she could be seen as a villainess in her current/altered situation. Examples of some possible reasonings/misunderstandings are choosing work/money over people, leading on and heartbreaking the male MC, and throwing the weight of her position around to make others do what she wants.

But this story still hits the assignment of the anthology. She was born as the villainess, worked at avoiding her bad end, which her efforts and personality made her have a happy ending.

All in all, I like it
 

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