Becoming the Queen at the Age of Six - Ch. 3 - What kind of person is this new “Tracy”?

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There's so many problems with the story build so far. It's doable since they just copy/pasted the basic prologue of "the abused mc makes a comeback" plot, but the delivery needs to be way better. We understood the abuse in the prologue, no need to continuously bring it up. It's disgusting each time, and if you're showing it each chapter, I'm disgusted each chapter😐. Basically, we got it the first time... say less (show less). The mc is a complete dunce, apparently. Acting her age is really kicking her ass, well, did she even try? Like I said, complete fukn dunce. I can't back a dunce mc, so hopefully the dumb shit resolved itself this chapter.
 
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There's so many problems with the story build so far. It's doable since they just copy/pasted the basic prologue of "the abused mc makes a comeback" plot, but the delivery needs to be way better. We understood the abuse in the prologue, no need to continuously bring it up. It's disgusting each time, and if you're showing it each chapter, I'm disgusted each chapter😐. Basically, we got it the first time... say less (show less). The mc is a complete dunce, apparently. Acting her age is really kicking her ass, well, did she even try? Like I said, complete fukn dunce. I can't back a dunce mc, so hopefully the dumb shit resolved itself this chapter.
Did we read the same thing? Half of this chapter is just her successfully luring her bullies into admitting that they framed her, the previous chapter she reveals her abuses in such a way that can't be ignored and successfully escaped her uncle's manor. Don't get me wrong this is very formulaic and the new timeline seems very askew, but the MC is far from dumb
 
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um prologue says she started living with uncle at 3 and lived there for 6 years so she left with grandpa at 9 why does she say she's a year early when shes actually 3 years? did i miss something?
 

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