Osananajimi Kanojo no Morahara ga Hidoin de Zetsuen Sengen shite Yatta ~Jibun Rashiku Ikiru Koto ni Shitara, Naze ka Tonari no Seki no Kakure Bishouj…

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The author gang rapes the old girl when she was a virgin then just fucks off to this nothing of a story? Thats just objectively bad story telling if we just look at it from that perspective. Then we look at it from a human perspective and it gets worse
I wouldn't say it's bad storytelling inherently. If Nanho's text is related to Hanabi's storyline then it would be marrying the A and B plots of this arc. Even if it is not, as long as Hanabi is still relevant, it still acts as a background element that (if competently written) will have a pay-off. Mind you, the last time we saw Hanabi was one and a half chapters ago. That isn't that long ago storywise.
 
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The author gang rapes the old girl when she was a virgin then just fucks off to this nothing of a story? Thats just objectively bad story telling if we just look at it from that perspective. Then we look at it from a human perspective and it gets worse
It sucks because it is clear that Yukishiro is doing something (stupid) offscreen to help Hanabi after she saw her appearance just after finishing the gangrape shift at the public toilet.
Just show us SOMETHING apart from that one panel saying "she seems naive... BUT IS SHE?!? DUNDUNDUN".

But that matter is something too big for her and she should simply her boyfriend and involve the police. It does also concern MC on multiple layers.
Her not telling him and us not even knowing if she truly is doing something helpful makes it seem like "I kinda feel sorry for this poor raped girl but she fucked with my bf so I won't get his valuable input on how to possibly help because he might want her to reap what she's sown" LMAO
 
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Holy shit, can this bitch just FUCK OFF already???


She's a fucking snake, the absolute audacity for her to tell Souma to not make Yukishiro cry meanwhile she be casually stealing bfs from her other coworkers


Take a swan dive off a cliff
 
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It sucks because it is clear that Yukishiro is doing something (stupid) offscreen to help Hanabi after she saw her appearance just after finishing the gangrape shift at the public toilet.
Just show us SOMETHING apart from that one panel saying "she seems naive... BUT IS SHE?!? DUNDUNDUN".

But that matter is something too big for her and she should simply her boyfriend and involve the police. It does also concern MC on multiple layers.
Her not telling him and us not even knowing if she truly is doing something helpful makes it seem like "I kinda feel sorry for this poor raped girl but she fucked with my bf so I won't get his valuable input on how to possibly help because he might want her to reap what she's sown" LMAO
I mean the most realistic scenario would be reporting this to the police and having them handle it since you'd have to be retarded to not realise shes obviously being raped and unless the author wants us to believe that shes not only extremely naive but also blind and stupid theres no way nothing would of happened by now.
 
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I can’t feel anything anymore when I see the cute moments in this one, knowing that Hanabi is probably getting gang raped in some public toilets at the same time. She is an evil bitch but she didn’t deserve that.
Now the other evil bitch started showing her fangs, great. Mc won’t believe her, at least I hope, since he has experience… so what will she do then ? Spread some rumors to the other coworkers ?
Thanks for the translation
Yeah it's insane, I'm waiting on her revealing Hanabi's fate so I really can't just go with the flow of their cute interactions. The tepid conflict in pushy co-worker-chan feels almost muted in comparison. Christ for all we know she'll be in the park toilets with Hanabi as the author's punishment for her daring to be a failed home wrecker.

Thanks for the TL
 
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This Hanabi story either ends with

1. Hanabi killing herself to protect Ichinose, thus completing her redemption

or

2. Ichinose rescuing Hanabi from sexual servitude, thus saving the girl who once tried to destroy him

I have a really strong feeling Hanabi’s gonna die tho

Btw where’s this “gang-rape” coming from? All we know so far is she’s been to the public toilet several times in a week for sex work. Yes it‘s rape, she a minor, but ”gang-rape” makes it sound like five men are in there at once with her when she might just be giving handies to old creeps one at a time
 
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yea i find weird that there are some who don't consider verbal abuse/blackmail as violence. Its entirely possible that there was no rough housing (even though its very much implied), but since its clear blackmail, it very much warrants the sexual violence tag. Abuse comes in various forms, it doesn't have to be just physical
You literally don’t understand the definition of violence. This is Tik Tok Brain rot in action
 
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For what little it's worth, at least the Hanabi situation* was sort of acknowledged this chapter, with Fumi saying there was something on her mind she promised someone she wouldn't talk about. But god damn the writing and pacing are getting frustrating.

*Insert "The Hanabi Situation is CRAZY" Youtube thumbnail here
 
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"Y'not think that's pretty mean?"
Nope, not at all. All deserving characters got to know.

"Must be hard to be popular and all, with all the temptations like that. ... Don't forget it's even more worrying for the girlfriend, she's got it tougher than the guy!"
She just won't stop waving the red flags.

Actually said she'd let them to go home together. I think that's the first green flag I've seen from her.

"You can't say things like that."
No, you should say things like that. Communicate more.

Yep, teasing is good.

I can see why he's sighing about that text.
 
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The author gang rapes the old girl when she was a virgin then just fucks off to this nothing of a story? Thats just objectively bad story telling if we just look at it from that perspective. Then we look at it from a human perspective and it gets worse
Maybe i misunderstood but its implying Hanabi cheating mc in the beginning of the story 🧐
 

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