I wouldn't say it's bad storytelling inherently. If Nanho's text is related to Hanabi's storyline then it would be marrying the A and B plots of this arc. Even if it is not, as long as Hanabi is still relevant, it still acts as a background element that (if competently written) will have a pay-off. Mind you, the last time we saw Hanabi was one and a half chapters ago. That isn't that long ago storywise.The author gang rapes the old girl when she was a virgin then just fucks off to this nothing of a story? Thats just objectively bad story telling if we just look at it from that perspective. Then we look at it from a human perspective and it gets worse
It sucks because it is clear that Yukishiro is doing something (stupid) offscreen to help Hanabi after she saw her appearance just after finishing the gangrape shift at the public toilet.The author gang rapes the old girl when she was a virgin then just fucks off to this nothing of a story? Thats just objectively bad story telling if we just look at it from that perspective. Then we look at it from a human perspective and it gets worse
I mean the most realistic scenario would be reporting this to the police and having them handle it since you'd have to be retarded to not realise shes obviously being raped and unless the author wants us to believe that shes not only extremely naive but also blind and stupid theres no way nothing would of happened by now.It sucks because it is clear that Yukishiro is doing something (stupid) offscreen to help Hanabi after she saw her appearance just after finishing the gangrape shift at the public toilet.
Just show us SOMETHING apart from that one panel saying "she seems naive... BUT IS SHE?!? DUNDUNDUN".
But that matter is something too big for her and she should simply her boyfriend and involve the police. It does also concern MC on multiple layers.
Her not telling him and us not even knowing if she truly is doing something helpful makes it seem like "I kinda feel sorry for this poor raped girl but she fucked with my bf so I won't get his valuable input on how to possibly help because he might want her to reap what she's sown" LMAO
Yeah it's insane, I'm waiting on her revealing Hanabi's fate so I really can't just go with the flow of their cute interactions. The tepid conflict in pushy co-worker-chan feels almost muted in comparison. Christ for all we know she'll be in the park toilets with Hanabi as the author's punishment for her daring to be a failed home wrecker.I can’t feel anything anymore when I see the cute moments in this one, knowing that Hanabi is probably getting gang raped in some public toilets at the same time. She is an evil bitch but she didn’t deserve that.
Now the other evil bitch started showing her fangs, great. Mc won’t believe her, at least I hope, since he has experience… so what will she do then ? Spread some rumors to the other coworkers ?
Thanks for the translation
You literally don’t understand the definition of violence. This is Tik Tok Brain rot in actionyea i find weird that there are some who don't consider verbal abuse/blackmail as violence. Its entirely possible that there was no rough housing (even though its very much implied), but since its clear blackmail, it very much warrants the sexual violence tag. Abuse comes in various forms, it doesn't have to be just physical
Nope, not at all. All deserving characters got to know."Y'not think that's pretty mean?"
She just won't stop waving the red flags."Must be hard to be popular and all, with all the temptations like that. ... Don't forget it's even more worrying for the girlfriend, she's got it tougher than the guy!"
No, you should say things like that. Communicate more."You can't say things like that."
Chapter 47.2 ended pretty much immediately before the start of this chapter, so it's chapter 48.1 for sure.Which episode is this one? 48.1 or 48.2?
Maybe i misunderstood but its implying Hanabi cheating mc in the beginning of the story 🧐The author gang rapes the old girl when she was a virgin then just fucks off to this nothing of a story? Thats just objectively bad story telling if we just look at it from that perspective. Then we look at it from a human perspective and it gets worse