I think noIs this canon?
Sorry about that, what parts do you think I could improve on?please learn to typest
just read thisSorry about that, what parts do you think I could improve on?
I'll take a look, thanks!
Oh that's a great idea, thanks!Thank you for the translation! I do think though that since it’s technically still a doujinshi to have it as its own separate entry since it’s not canon to the story. I also recommend you increase the vertical spacing between your lines as having them cramped makes for an uncomfortable read.