Maou-sama wa Kaifuku Majutsu o Kiwametai: Sono Seijo, Sekai Saikyou ni Tsuki - Ch. 1

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I can't speak for the accuracy of the translation but the quality's very good. Your font choices are great, the typesetting is great. The translation reads well and I think the only slightly awkward thing I could spot was on the first page:

"Urgh... as expected, he's strong... the Great Demon Lord Rubulvim."
It's kinda awkward to have his name just hanging at the end of the sentence in English like that. But I also can't think of any way to word it that sounds even vaguely natural. I'll just chalk it up to 'gotta introduce the character real fast'
 
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Translation seems pretty solid, just needs a little quality checking here and there for readability.

As for the story, talk about missing out on his true goal. Sure he might get to master healing magic but a thousand year time skip means at best he'll/she'll be able to challenge the hero's great-great-etc. descendants.

Though I suppose it does fit the goddess' goal of removing him entirely from the situation for generations while still fulfilling her promise.
 
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So I am guessing that this is one of these story where the mc is insanely overpowered and barely has any real challenges?
 
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I can't speak for the accuracy of the translation but the quality's very good. Your font choices are great, the typesetting is great. The translation reads well and I think the only slightly awkward thing I could spot was on the first page:

"Urgh... as expected, he's strong... the Great Demon Lord Rubulvim."
It's kinda awkward to have his name just hanging at the end of the sentence in English like that. But I also can't think of any way to word it that sounds even vaguely natural. I'll just chalk it up to 'gotta introduce the character real fast'
If it's to make it sound more natural, would "Urgh... as expected of the Great Demon Lord Rubulvim... he's strong" work better?
 

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