Maou-sama wa Kaifuku Majutsu o Kiwametai: Sono Seijo, Sekai Saikyou ni Tsuki - Ch. 1

[erellisae]

If it's to make it sound more natural, would "Urgh... as expected of the Great Demon Lord Rubulvim... he's strong" work better?

Yeah, probably? But it's still the goofy situation where this is supposed to be someone he's fought with many times and clearly is friends with. The only reason he's saying the full title is for the reader's benefit so it's gonna kinda suck either way.

 

[Kyuketsuki]

Hero vs Demon lord (of healing) be like...

Nanomachines Son.

 

[Resound]

saying it now.... if you are a guy that reincarnated as a girl and fell in love with a guy, you are gay

 

[Nok27]

Not gonna lie, Male Demon Lord is kinda bad tho...

 

[TestAddress]

Nanomachines Son.

T-1000

 

[S-Reader]

There's a mistranslation on the dialogue perspective, better to use "he" rather than "you" to shown their perspective talked about the demon king. Overall it's better than some scanlation out there, just needed some research of dictionary left. I might be wrong too as English isn't my native language, so cmiiw

 

[essensue]

There's always room for improvement, but I never suspected you weren't a native speaker. Great work, hope you continue!

 

[arielsawesome]

Thanks for translating! I didn't notice any issues and that's good enough for most readers. It sucks that a great translator is unnoticed while a bad one is bullied....

Anyways: I didn't know that English wasn’t your native language until another person pointed it out.