Old enough to make money means old enough to carry own weight regardless of age are typical idea on current time.Aisa's parents messed up to teach their daughter some humility. Though she certainly isn't painted in the best light, she's still just a small child.
Good on Maki to give her genuine advice with that in mind. Now on to some shock treatment and a harsh reality check.
Thank you for the corrections.page 5 wach -> watch
page 6 I'm home in -> I'm home
page 8 has a double space before Aisa
page 12 >how come the two of you here together.
I think you need a verb in there
Could you also change the font? The dots on top of the Is and Js is very distracting.Thank you for the corrections.I'll fix those and a few minor text-alignment issues which bugged me once I'm back home.
I kinda, sorta rushed this one out and it shows.![]()
I'm absolutely up for suggestions, yes.Could you also change the font? The dots on top of the Is and Js is very distracting.
I guess you mean the one from online-fonts?The current one for dialogue is Anime Ace v3 Regular
Or I suppose you could also just write everything in capitals. It's not that unusual.I guess you mean the one from online-fonts?
A font by the same name (also free for non-profit use) on blambot.com (and also Anime Ace 2 with the same license) would be better.
Got the files from Google Drive or something I believe, and I figured the one I was using was that same official font, but apparently not.I guess you mean the one from online-fonts?
A font by the same name (also free for non-profit use) on blambot.com (and also Anime Ace 2 with the same license) would be better.
Besides the dots on top of the Is and Js, I can't see a difference.Got the files from Google Drive or something I believe, and I figured the one I was using was that same official font, but apparently not.
But yeah, anyway, I have got the official font files now and will be re-editing the chapters I have already uploaded, and of course use them for any future chapters I might do.
Honestly a bit hard to tell any meaningful difference myself; but seeing as the proper font is what many others seem to use as well, I should be using that one regardless.
Aisa's parents messed up to teach their daughter some humility. Though she certainly isn't painted in the best light, she's still just a small child.
Good on Maki to give her genuine advice with that in mind. Now on to some shock treatment and a harsh reality check.