Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu (Fan Colored) - Vol. 4 Ch. 220 - Criticism, Feedback, Results

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Golden Bikini Kana from Golden Week, You can see you much My color has become somewhat different, It's just that in successive chapters my colors have become more saturated. My Coloring of her hair is same as original but you need to reduce saturation, other than that it's same.

The risk she took opened her to all the attacks.

Kana in last panel can melt ice-berg.

With this We have reached the half of afternoon mini-arc, we crossed in just two weeks, in original Timeline this arc was moving very slowly and we were waiting like hell for progress.
 
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in original Timeline this arc was moving very slowly and we were waiting like hell for progress.
...he was at least faster than your doujin :D
sorry, for that - but do you remember, who promised Sumire to let her have her date before the colorful lunchtime ends? It was before it even started...
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Kana in last panel can melt ice-berg.
But I have to say that I'm not too fond of micro bikinis in general. For Kana I would say she looks even better with something frilly that is less exposing, maybe more like THIS with a short sarong pareo for the lower part. Not that she needs to hide herself, she's splendid as she comes. But a lady (even a rotten one like her) should dress in proper attire even for the beach (or just go without any at all, especially when visiting me at night, ergh yeah...)
 
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Nice seeing Miku and Hinata defending Kana even though she's zooming ahead of them with this

Kana is lucky Sou is such an accommodating guy, that was not a great skit
Golden Bikini Kana from Golden Week, You can see you much My color has become somewhat different, It's just that in successive chapters my colors have become more saturated. My Coloring of her hair is same as original but you need to reduce saturation, other than that it's same.

The risk she took opened her to all the attacks.

Kana in last panel can melt ice-berg.

With this We have reached the half of afternoon mini-arc, we crossed in just two weeks, in original Timeline this arc was moving very slowly and we were waiting like hell for progress.
I prefer the way you do her hair ngl, it's more vibrant
 

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