Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu - Ch. 291.999 - Notice on Redrawing

[radstylix]

Write twice, draw once

Yes, but sometimes you only realize the problems or it's shit after you frickin post it 😅

 

[Mangamoz]

That fumble I saw and dropped in real time! But the Grapara one, you gotta ask an actual reader or NTR professional like @Mangamoz for verification. I heard this all secondhand. Also secondhand, but the author had a bad reputation in hentai for lazy writing and being a one trick NTR pony before the Grapara toxic waste dump.

I've read all of the Grapara author's works, and it is as you said, the Grapara "twist" was no twist. It was just her usual gimmick of making the protag a pathetic cuck at the end. Problem is that in Grapara him ending as a cuck contradicted his entire behavior throughout the whole story.

I also did see the whole deletion of negative comments live as it happened the day the final chap got released. She should stick to her hentai works and stay far away from actual stories.

Put the dick fries in the pussy bag lady.

 

[EirikrInnMyrkr]

I hope Miku still gets her moment to shine.

 

[BlackwingYu]

Bro overcooked

 

[chojinra]

This kind of sucks, but it is what it is. I wish he could write his way out of this 'hole', though. I wonder if there was complaints in the home country about those two chapters.

Also, I hope they stay up here somehow.

 

[cadaada]

At least this author is willing to restart instead of just forcing a storyline that doesn't work down our throat. I feel like there's a couple of manga like that, I think there's one call Grapara.

It was psudo ntr manga but became an actual ntr manga and got axed for it. Need to check it myself to see how bad the author screwed up but i remember the tweets about it at the time were full of hatred towards the author. I want to think of examples but i can't really remember probably because my brain deleted them.

Jesus ive never seen a manga with so many comments in this site lol. How people got bothered by ntr when getting into a ntr bait manga?

 

[HelpMePleaseImConfused]

I can respect an author who would rather admit they dont like where the story is heading cause they fucked up the flow than continue and make the story more confusing.

At least this author is willing to restart instead of just forcing a storyline that doesn't work down our throat. I feel like there's a couple of manga like that, I think there's one call Grapara.

It was psudo ntr manga but became an actual ntr manga and got axed for it. Need to check it myself to see how bad the author screwed up but i remember the tweets about it at the time were full of hatred towards the author. I want to think of examples but i can't really remember probably because my brain deleted them.

Let me look up who the author is and her other wor- andddd its a name in the NTR doujin industry. Who could had seen that coming. Im sticking to my ventures in trying to find more Gender Role Reversal.

 

[manpersonbob]

Damn. I was actually looking forward to the direction this was heading. I don't understand what the "insurmountable obstacle" could even be. It feels more like the author just gave up instead of rising to the occasion

 

[BlackSword]

I also did see the whole deletion of negative comments live as it happened the day the final chap got released. She should stick to her hentai works and stay far away from actual stories.

Put the dick fries in the pussy bag lady.

On the bright side, she probably burned every bridge, tunnel, and frayed rope she had in the industry with this, so she probably won't get another chance.

 

[sh1thappens]

poor Miku... you'll get your time in the sun, I fully believe

honestly, I much prefer this over going radio silent forever. Good on Kisa-sensei. Hope the redrawn/redone chapters turn out better than the current ones.

 

[Juggernautbob]

They reached a bad ending so they had to reload a previous save to stay on the
PG-13 route

 

[YoshMate1209]

Jesus ive never seen a manga with so many comments in this site lol. How people got bothered by ntr when getting into a ntr bait manga?

Simple, a joke is only funny when it's not real.

 

[adekdodog]

I think making the scrapped chapters into 289.6 - 289.7 then the redraw notice 289.8 would work since it would be displayed before the redrawn chapters but not as x.5 story of chp 289

 

[rei893]

The denseness of Sou even make the author rewrite the story, really the real demon king Sou

I already read the real chapter from Spanish group, i think it's not too offensive and can be counter back, miku stop the teacher, let the teacher step back into reality

 

[leo12345]

I don't really think the way chapter 292 was a dead end, but whatever. I'll be interested to see whatever the author cooks up instead.

 

[Adion]

Next re draw title should be called: Deja Vu.

 

[Kaito57]

Okay... well, as long the fun continues, that should be fine !

 

[Glider_Boom23]

Damn, another piece of evidence for my Miku slander is getting reconned

 

[Roriipupper]

I TRUST WHATEVER KISA SENSEI COOKS

 

[Sengil]

Yeah, I can see the problem with Sou acting this way, a man behaving like that to a "dangerous woman"... it's too unnatural for this world.
In our world, it would be like a sexy young lady getting aroused and making compliments to her would be rapist while undressing herself to entice him to attack her. It would feel "off". Like it would get past the point of "oh man, that's sexy" into "are you alright in the head?". It's one thing if Sou praises and hugs girls and a whole other if he goes "you are the woman of my dreams" to a stalker who is about to jump him. Like really.