Yami Kakusei Shite Shujinkou ni Bokosareru Kamaseinu ni Hyoui Shita ga Gensaku to Chigaisugite Tomadotteru

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Oke, jadi karakter aslinya seharusnya memiliki kemampuan 'mata kamera' sejak awal. Lalu kenapa dia kesulitan belajar...? Selain kesombongannya, tidak ada alasan baginya untuk kesulitan sampai-sampai pelayannya memarahinya, dll., karena MC hanya menggunakan kemampuannya dan menjadi pintar dalam waktu satu jam. Bahkan jika karakter aslinya malas, dia bisa dengan mudah mencapai buku ketiga dengan kemampuan menghafal dalam waktu sekitar satu bulan, bukan? MC memang kutu buku, tapi itu bukan satu-satunya faktor penentu... dia seharusnya lebih jelek, tapi bulu matanya panjang dan dia bertubuh standar serta rapi, jadi dia tidak terlalu jelek juga... Astaga, isekai memang kadang-kadang berlebihan sekali
This is translated form indonesian. So, please bear with me if the phrasing is stiff or contains errors. That is indeed a plot hole, I’ve found a possible explanation for it: memorization does not equate to understanding. In my experience, many people manage to memorize things without truly grasping them. Both processes have their own challenges, but memorization tends to be the easier of the two. Furthermore, the magic book doesn't just contain various spells and their corresponding magic circles; it also includes the underlying formulas that a mage must use to create new spells, refine existing ones, or replicate magic they have witnessed. We see that the reincarnator is highly adept at developing his magic far beyond what he learned from the book. Then there is the factor of magic control—something that cannot be mastered merely through study (reading) but requires practical, hands-on training. This training may also have contributed to the MC's already substantial magic capacity. which was already quite substantial to begin with. That’s probably all I have to ramble on about; I feel like I might have left something out, but oh well. I am very grateful if you took the time to read these musings of mine.

Edit: Oh yeah... I forgot something quite important. Apart from his arrogance, he also feels inferior to his older brother. He is always known as "Ganon-sama's talented younger brother" and "the second son of the influential RESTINATA family," without having anything in particular that makes him stand out. All of that could also have had a significant influence.
 
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damn this some good shit, i like the derpy characters
 
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saya indon juga hehe. yaaa ini lebih menjelaskan sedikit, cuma jomplangnya masih berlebihan di mata saya... rasanya masih agak ga masuk akal. ga nutup kemungkinan penjelasan lebih mendalam bakal muncul lagi seiring jalannya cerita, cuma kesel aja ngeliat MC ngebut jago kayak gitu hahah. bikin marah dikit malah kalo boleh jujur. yaaa nunggu marinasi dululah barangkali jauh hari nanti dicek lagi, mungkin nanti jadi bagus.
 
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saya indon juga hehe. yaaa ini lebih menjelaskan sedikit, cuma jomplangnya masih berlebihan di mata saya... rasanya masih agak ga masuk akal. ga nutup kemungkinan penjelasan lebih mendalam bakal muncul lagi seiring jalannya cerita, cuma kesel aja ngeliat MC ngebut jago kayak gitu hahah. bikin marah dikit malah kalo boleh jujur. yaaa nunggu marinasi dululah barangkali jauh hari nanti dicek lagi, mungkin nanti jadi bagus.
Indo juga ternyata.
Emang masih jompang banget sih
 
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Okay, so it's been a bit, and I've read up to the current chapters.

I have to say, I'm quite enjoying this. Oh, plot-wise, it's nothing particularly novel or exciting, but the story is serviceable for its purposes, and there are enough dangling threads that may or may not pan out into something plot-adjacent without drowning the reader in the faux 'rule of cool' trap bullshit that so many isekai manga authors fall into.

It's fun. Not brilliant, but fun. Character designs are decent enough, but this is elevated by really good artwork. If there's one criticism this early on, it's that everybody seems too agreeable. People who act as antagonists are immediately put in their place in standard fashion, and so there aren't any real continuing hostilities. I get it's early on, but that's a structural weakness here that I hope gets resolved soon.

There are a few 'romance-if-you-squint-and-wear-glasses' subtexts floating around, but it doesn't seem as if romance is going to be a primary theme, which isn't necessarily a bad thing - a lot of authors get lost in relationship twaddle, and it bogs down actual storyline development as all the sugary goo takes things over. And I'm getting real 'himbo' vibes from Protagonist-kun, but not in a bad way. For all that he is specifically designed to be the counter to the MC's 'Antagonist-kun' (and vice-versa), he seems remarkably, almost annoyingly affable. Serious Golden Retriever energy; a cinnamon roll made of dumb...but fun, in spite of his minimal characterization.

I guess it's still too early to call things, because we're still in the phase of finding out who everybody is, to say nothing of just who that 'everybody' is supposed to include.

I guess I'm still optimistic about the direction this is going, as I'm annoyed that there isn't more - too many unanswered questions for the 'tism in my brain to be satisfied with a conclusion.
 

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