Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu - Ch. 291.5 - Kuroki Erika, Questioned 【Scrapped Draft】

[a55x]

Should have kept this timeline

 

[JackofSpades261]

i dont understand why Kisa decide to redo this arc, this chapter was hilarious

Author redid this arc because there wasn't enough Sumire slander.

 

[Tanaka_Taro]

Author redid this arc because there wasn't enough Sumire slander.

Ironically, this may also be a good opportunity to let everyone know that the Violet leaks are based on reality, lol.

 

[Megukagi]

If possible, I wish there was a way to order these chapters in a less confusing way, something like:

ch. 290 - ch.290 revised version
ch. 291 - ch. 291 revised version
ch. 291.1 - mention of the scrapped draft thing
ch. 291.290 - ch.290 old version
ch. 291.291 - ch.291 old version
ch. 291.292 - ch.292 scrapped draft

main reason for this is that having it alternate between different world lines like old -> new -> old -> new would be confusing for someone who isn't reading these as they come out

or adding a page at the start of the scrapped chapters to mark that it's non canon could work

 

[Noskal_Borg]

Awww, Kisa tries so hard to please us! 😃

 

[sdfiuseh545]

I was really enjoying this draft, I think it's funnier then the revised version (The Sumire slander was pretty good though). I could see it going as Hinata forcing her way into the role play to steer it in a way that calms down Erika-Sensei, Sou gets annoyed at Hinata for trying to derail his story. At the same time, Miku gets mad at Hinata cause Sou chose her. You have Sou trying to continue his TeacherxStudent ERP, Hinata failing to reel it back, and Miku changing the story to insult Hinata and make herself look like the most beautifulest and the most sexiest women who is perfect for and soulmates with Sou. This goes for a bit until it devolves into the three genuinely arguing and Erika-Sensei has long since calmed down.

 

[SSRBReader]

They're acting right?