Cool na Doukyuusei no 10-nengo - Ch. 3

[MangaDex]

 

[DPChaos]

I WILL SACRIFICE MYSELF FOR HARU-CHAN'S SMILE

 

[LongCT_]

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[razorshaleh]

Shinzo Abe always has a big smile after looking at this family

thank you for translation

 

[Septazia]

I think seeing the back and forth makes what would be a typical tsundere CF story much more rewarding, because it feels like there is a tangible visible goal already.

compared to how usually is just many chapters of suffering with very little payoff at the very end.

Another nice thing is to see how they are actually different people as adults...well character wise.

 

[Genzerum]

Yeah... Drop, this has nothing to do with the original, just same concept and similar characters.

 

[BlackSword]

Turning the kuudere into a tsundere into a dandere, the True long play! I think her family is like eight people, her baby sister, and like six elder brothers.

 

[OWMWO]

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Thanks for the chapter.

There is H in HUSBAND.
There is H in HUBBY.
There is H in HAVE SEGS.

 

[Hicleric]

I think seeing the back and forth makes what would be a typical tsundere CF story much more rewarding, because it feels like there is a tangible visible goal already.

compared to how usually is just many chapters of suffering with very little payoff at the very end.

Another nice thing is to see how they are actually different people as adults...well character wise.

That's a fair point, which makes the story's struggles feel like a real missed opportunity. This work could be a standout if the author could figure out how to write the dialogue a little more naturally and keep the pacing interesting. It all feels very stilted right now, so at this point I'm just here for Haru.

Tell us the story of Haru please, author

 

[Septazia]

Yeah... Drop, this has nothing to do with the original, just same concept and similar characters.

What do you think is missing?

 

[Genzerum]

What do you think is missing?

An art, vibes, the nature of the characters, the gag nature of original work, lack of a proper punch and it's way over-dragged inside one chapter.

 

[jackjack9]

Kuru has always had a soft side. Nowadays she's more willing to show her soft side out in the open.

 

[Parnifia]

He never did bring up the snacks.

 

[Chronigan]

Yeah... Drop, this has nothing to do with the original, just same concept and similar characters.

Okay..... I mean same characters, same premise, just just more than 2 pages and an actual cohesive story but sure, nothing to do with the original.

 

[Chronigan]

That's a fair point, which makes the story's struggles feel like a real missed opportunity. This work could be a standout if the author could figure out how to write the dialogue a little more naturally and keep the pacing interesting. It all feels very stilted right now, so at this point I'm just here for Haru.

Tell us the story of Haru please, author

Not sure if I would blame the original author for wierd dialogue in a translated work.

 

[Pluveus]

An art, vibes, the nature of the characters, the gag nature of original work, lack of a proper punch and it's way over-dragged inside one chapter.

I mean this is serialized. As a webcomic, it could just be the gags. This looks like there's going to be a bit of a story and the past connecting to the 10 years later part. In the original it was just a house built on a foundation of gap moe. The only character that has changed is the daughter, because she's acting like a little girl instead of acting as Tsukkomi for the parents getting lovey dovey. The dad has a little more personality and is acting as his own Tsukkomi now.

 

[Pluveus]

Having gone back to read the pre-serialization again, everything post chaper 100 is basically like the serialization.

 

[Seyclops]

He is gonna be like a dried up prune this by the end of the rainy season.

 

[Septazia]

An art, vibes, the nature of the characters, the gag nature of original work, lack of a proper punch and it's way over-dragged inside one chapter.

I don't get it, I guess I need to re-read the preserialization

 

[Hicleric]

Not sure if I would blame the original author for wierd dialogue in a translated work.

If it were a different TL sure, but @OsisNie has a fantastic track record