Scavengers Another Sky - Vol. 3 Ch. 20 - B-24 Ghost Extermination Pt. 4
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I think I ought to point out a few mistakes(?) probably, they just sound weird.
Page 4: “We won’t eat you” is strange in context, why would she talk to the dog, and it seems like she’s just talking with 1010.
Page 13 (and 24): I think “Mission Retire” is supposed to be a proper term for scavengers who extended their stay in the BP and has to wait for the next bus to come pick them up (which has been established during the first fight with the astronaut suit dog) so I just think it would be better with a bit of consistency. Since, you know, the official called it as a “mislaid”, I think. Better to use that term because it’s an official English one.
Page 17: “Ghost Subjugation”, the phrasing is fine, but just last chapter I seem to recall that it’s supposed to be “Ghost Extermination” now? I seem to be under the impression that it’s a proper term when fighting specifically Avengers (or in your case, vengeful ghosts, not just any floaters), so it may be a tad inappropriate.
Page 20: 1055 called 1010 as “1001”, might want to change that.
So thanks for the upload and translation! Can’t wait to see the big fight! See you next time!
Page 4: “We won’t eat you” is strange in context, why would she talk to the dog, and it seems like she’s just talking with 1010.
Page 13 (and 24): I think “Mission Retire” is supposed to be a proper term for scavengers who extended their stay in the BP and has to wait for the next bus to come pick them up (which has been established during the first fight with the astronaut suit dog) so I just think it would be better with a bit of consistency. Since, you know, the official called it as a “mislaid”, I think. Better to use that term because it’s an official English one.
Page 17: “Ghost Subjugation”, the phrasing is fine, but just last chapter I seem to recall that it’s supposed to be “Ghost Extermination” now? I seem to be under the impression that it’s a proper term when fighting specifically Avengers (or in your case, vengeful ghosts, not just any floaters), so it may be a tad inappropriate.
Page 20: 1055 called 1010 as “1001”, might want to change that.
So thanks for the upload and translation! Can’t wait to see the big fight! See you next time!
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