Kimi ga Hoeru Tame no Uta wo, - Vol. 5 Ch. 22 - Scream

[GennArc]

When I said at least two. You know how that looks like a blatant slip you didn't process my words.

And that's why I included two of the things you listed in that one scenario.

If Yuu's mother went "Sorry, I was too prideful to admit I made a wrong choice of abandoning you" +something about Miyuki

Will you finally answer my original question or do you just want to "win the argument"?

You're mind-reading about others intentions and goals to infer that it undermines their argument

Undermines which argument? I don't think I'm contesting anything here.
I'm reading those posts and they never say anything about Yuu's mom being written poorly, unlike yours. They always call for some punishment or how disappointed they are going to be if she escapes punishment. And I'm drawing my conclusions based on that available information. I'm not saying those posts are morally or factually wrong, I'm saying I view it differently.
And you say I'm making assumptions, fine, but what exactly did you base that on?

Some hate on the mom comes from a place that she's neither realistically nor dramatically flawed at this point, which (realistically and dramatically) undercuts the readers' emotional investment.

 

[gudang1]

Njir kena karma 🤣

 

[Makore]

Kashikaze at her best shows how strong bonds give people the strength to tackle their most deep-seated issues and move forward together. Kashikaze at her worst is endless asspull clichés and cheap shoujo melodrama. Can't Defy the Lonely Girl was always balancing those two sides on a knife edge (I ended up really liking it, but I thought it was good despite the writing instead of because of it), and in this one the knife seems to have cut right through the beam.

That said, she's one of the best character designers in yuri and even if the art seems a little more hastily rendered than some earlier chapters, it's still very good looking. And I think she can still pull it out as long as RURIKO doesn't immediately succumb to Anime Wasting Disease.

You're so real for this. Well maybe except on the second section since I have lots of GL/yuri artists I really like.
I hate to have to say this, but this plotline is touching the trainwreck levels of bad if it's not that yet. At this point, it's even annoying to drop it so I can only hope this ends soon.

 

[KZO]

I'm started to get worried this might not get an anime and we might never hear a Lupinus concert.

 

[othiym23]

You're so real for this. Well maybe except on the second section since I have lots of GL/yuri artists I really like.

I mean, so do I, but I have a thing for sharp-eyed girls with a lil fangy charm point, and she does those as well as anyone working in manga. I'd really like to see her do an OL or college yuri series about a hardworking mildly butch service top.

 

[1carlinhos_15cavalos]

I just saw the cover, and
I thought it was Natsuki and Yuri from doki doki 😭🙏🙏

 

[MiraAST]

huh?