I think there's a wonky sentence on page 19;
...I was hallucinating her. (which I'll admit, still is a kind of wonky sentence)
The space might not allow it, but I'd expect;
...I was fantasising about her/ ...I fantasised about her.
Page 26; (I get that sex can indeed be likened to a battle, but it doesn't really fit this context IMHO)
...coming here, play with me.
Anywho, for a newcomer, this translation was pretty good overall tbh. Prior to p19, I thought it was an experienced TL.
As for Misa; I really feel for her. I can't say I'm surprised, because a lot of the time behaviours that are frowned upon have their roots in negative experiences and she definitely had a lot going on all at once, my word ':/
I was always in her camp, but I feel a bit more comfortable with her sadist/ dominant tendencies knowing what she'd been through now.
Thank you for the translation :>