Utsushicha Dame-na Kao - Vol. 4 Ch. 21 - The peak of youth

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I think there's a wonky sentence on page 19;

...I was hallucinating her. (which I'll admit, still is a kind of wonky sentence)

The space might not allow it, but I'd expect;

...I was fantasising about her/ ...I fantasised about her.

Page 26; (I get that sex can indeed be likened to a battle, but it doesn't really fit this context IMHO)

...coming here, play with me.

Anywho, for a newcomer, this translation was pretty good overall tbh. Prior to p19, I thought it was an experienced TL.

As for Misa; I really feel for her. I can't say I'm surprised, because a lot of the time behaviours that are frowned upon have their roots in negative experiences and she definitely had a lot going on all at once, my word ':/

I was always in her camp, but I feel a bit more comfortable with her sadist/ dominant tendencies knowing what she'd been through now.

Thank you for the translation :>
 
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I think there's a wonky sentence on page 19;



The space might not allow it, but I'd expect;



Page 26; (I get that sex can indeed be likened to a battle, but it doesn't really fit this context IMHO)



Anywho, for a newcomer, this translation was pretty good overall tbh. Prior to p19, I thought it was an experienced TL.

As for Misa; I really feel for her. I can't say I'm surprised, because a lot of the time behaviours that are frowned upon have their roots in negative experiences and she definitely had a lot going on all at once, my word ':/

I was always in her camp, but I feel a bit more comfortable with her sadist/ dominant tendencies knowing what she'd been through now.

Thank you for the translation :>
I did choose to stick with hallucinating, since she actually says her name. I'm not a native english-speaker though.
Good catch with the missing "with". That was an oversight...
 
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My man (or woman). First Hitozuma to JK and now this? You are the hero we need.

Also, the step-mom looks a lot like Io. I don't think that's a coincidence.
 
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man whys there always gotta be some past woman you cant get over in yuri, whats next ?? shes gonna make a sudden reappearance :huh:
 
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A BABY SHOULDN’T BE PRODUCING THIS KIND OF SORDID MATERIAL! IT IS INAPPROPRIATE FOR SOMEONE WHO IS JUST A BABY!

(But thank you so very kindly for picking this up I love this shizz so freaking much it is just so good give me so much more 🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️)
 

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