Tsuki wa Hitsuji o Kazoenai - Vol. 3 Ch. 22 - Understanding

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I really loved this story but you can tell it got axed I guess. They feel like theyre blitzing to the finish line as fast as possible while trying to hit as many story beats as they had planned out in what little time they had, and its annihilating the pacing

Selene’s past was probably going to be a much more significant story beat, afterall she even wanted a different name when she came to this world. Her family’s “love” probably traumatized her in some way, cheating, divorce, maybe even abuse.

Im kinda just sad
 
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Ran a lot of cardio to get the heart beating faster for the inevitable confession...

Oddly common trend for the author to beat around the bush close to the coming together... oh well, one last ride!
 
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Istg if I ever win the lottery or become rich, I would just throw money at series to make sure that shits like this won't ever happen to a series I like ever again man.
Also I wished Sakuragi Ren could've just stuck with her original plan and left us hanging instead of doing whatever the fck this is maaaaaan :meguuusad::meguuusad::meguuusad:
 
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So, individual story beats that probably deserved their own arcs which we've all wrapped into one chapter because of the axe:
  • Selene struggling with what 'love' even is
  • Selene's past
  • side character yuri
  • whatever is going on with the previous isekai'd girl and the cat
Am I missing any?
Author I think if you got axed you should have picked One of these to spend your last few chapters on and not just followed your existing outline but at neck-breaking speed
 
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So, individual story beats that probably deserved their own arcs which we've all wrapped into one chapter because of the axe:
  • Selene struggling with what 'love' even is
  • Selene's past
  • side character yuri
  • whatever is going on with the previous isekai'd girl and the cat
Am I missing any?
Author I think if you got axed you should have picked One of these to spend your last few chapters on and not just followed your existing outline but at neck-breaking speed
I'm pretty sure we got 40 chapters of planned content into 4.
 

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