I appreciate you working on this rpapo but this could use a proofreader. For example Matsumoto says that Yakushimaru is a weirdo and not "changed". That's why MC is annoyed and answers "What's wrong with being a bit weird?" and storms off.
Black Cat version is also resized and overfiltered - making a lot of panels lose fine details. Look at Himari's lips for example or the sky on page 14.