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The author made a whole lot of unnecessary dialogue. The introduction would have been way better if it's separated into two chapters and structured in a more concise way. The author dumps too much info in just a few panels, and some of them aren't entirely necessary. Due to that, the flow is...

Fuck the story, it's shit. The art is so fucking good though

When can we fucking see him ruin the sage? I already want him beat up. So far it's just a lot of romantic 'development' - which honestly isn't needed since they already like each other.

That was... how do I say this, a bit of a letdown? for a final chapter. I wanna say a 'letdown' but it isn't as bad as the worst chapter in the whole anthology, but at the same time it's a little worse for just a 'little bit of a letdown'. Probably between 'a letdown' and 'a little bit of a...

I like the girl in this, but holy fuck the dude is a cunt. Ruined the chapter for me.

Can ya'll please forward this doujin to Elon Musk

I assume the girl's penpal was herself, or more like her insane self. idk what the other childhood friend, Haku's, role is though.