It's not great but only because it feels very done at this point, down to a T. While some things are overkill and lame (evil goddess but doesnt just kill him; regular japanese class that decides to kill someone on the flip of a dime; instant cape), this is still the beginning so as long as it...
yo, this one's off to a super strong start. not many tropes so far other than a very basic isekai skeleton and the monster hunter setting is pretty refreshing.
It can still be a pleasant read if you just put zero expectations into it and any plot progression, yeah. I am getting sick of the whole "omg, her underwears" stuff, though. At some point, this dude should just be numb to it even if he did start out as the most repressed human being alive.
So...Menel is actually a girl, right? I'm not imagining that? Are the "he"s and "his"es mistranslation, the main's misunderstanding, or am I just straight up delusional? The clothes, high heels, legs, look as a child, expressions, etc.
I agree with the monstrous-boobs hate. The obnoxious trips-over-everything-then-cries-about-it personality doesn't help much either. As heroines go, this one's a real minus.
It's not just that she's a stalker, but it's that everything she does is overtly creepy obsessiveness. If you find that kind of behavior cute, more power to ya, but that is most definitely not my cup of tea. Now, I'm fine with bad and unlikable characters existing in stories, obviously, but I...
@devour
Just a minor thought-provoking comment about how ridiculous some scenes in manga are because its a cute girl saying it instead of anything else. Might wanna take a deep breath there.
Exactly. It's not about fatherhood, family, exploration, adventure, world domination, fame, etc. It's just about the random stupid whims of a pampered unlikable princess and the presence-less mc that obeys them. They could easily fix this story by either changing the mcs attitude towards...
@Weasalopes
You misunderstand. I'm not criticizing the choice of which child to be terrorized, I'm talking about the lunch. Did he really have to go after her lunch as well? It's bad enough that it's coincidentally her, but it also had to be the one item on her already established. Like, come...
Quaint shonen manga, but the number one thing that bothered me was the villain going straight for his sister's lunch. Like, come on. That's just lazy writing.
@Askun Hey, you've got a great attitude, man. If you're still looking for fonts, the main font to use for normal bubbles is wild words (although, I might be wrong. It's been a while). Just search for wild words on google or fontsgeek. Also, you've already gotten a ton of advice on getting a...
@YellowChica Better check yourself before you go off like a madman. I made a light jab at the bad quality, not spit in his face and tore his work to pieces. It was bad; (even bad) manga deserves more than this; he knows his level of proficiency; imo, nothing is sometimes better than bad; that's...