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    Mato Seihei no Slave - Vol. 6 Ch. 42 - A Slave's Resolve

    @Shinigamisama You're confusing "death Flag" with the Shonen Trop "training arc trigger". It's the moment something happens to push the MC to get stronger like never before. If they lacked a motivation before then they get one, their motivation is reinforced, or it's replaced. In any case they...
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    The Skeleton Soldier Failed to Defend the Dungeon - Vol. 2 Ch. 90

    @rrolo1 Yeah end of last season was terrible. The MC was way too passive and just kinda getting dragged around rather than doing ANYTHING. Like it's fine for the MC to not be OP but there needs to be a limit to the MC losing as well. Especially if that means the MC being a passive observer in...
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    The Skeleton Soldier Failed to Defend the Dungeon - Vol. 2 Ch. 90

    @broldakka She'll be fairly easy. he just needs to say what she told him to say in order to make her back off from killing the emperor. This will also have the side effect of preventing the marquis from dying since he won't go on the war path against the imperial palace over his lover's death.
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    The Skeleton Soldier Failed to Defend the Dungeon - Vol. 2 Ch. 87

    @screamdoom IKR? LIke seriously I don't want to get into the details of Gender and all that but that .. thing could not be more masculine even if it bathed in pure testosterone in their own mother's womb! The only thing "Feminine" was that lipstick. I REALLY REALLY hate when authors add this...
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    Oretachi no Party wa Machigatteiru - Vol. 3 Ch. 30 - Still a Mess

    Really rushed ending but I'm glad to at least read it. It at least gives some closure to the story.
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    Level One Demon Lord and One-Room Hero

    @starburst98 well chapter 1 shows so much of them nude that it was 90% certain they were female. Generally when you see THAT MUCH and see nothing it means Vagina. But to add onto that chapter 3 has then age themselves up to a student's age and they are clearly female. They had no particular...
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    The setting is a little odd. Like how the demon lord just decides "yeah I'm gonna live with and take care of this guy" kinda out of nowhere. Like I get she wanted a rematch and all that but the logical leaps to set all this up just feels a LITTLE out of place. I've seen this same concept used...
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    Mairimashita! Iruma-kun - Vol. 17 Ch. 143 - Heartfelt Cooking Lesson

    You know it's been a long time since I've been this legit unable to detect who Iruma's more likely to end up with. Sure it's also possible it will be left open ended but assuming he does end up with SOMEONE ... who? Both Clara and Amelia seem serious about Iruma in their own way and while at...
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    Mairimashita! Iruma-kun - Vol. 17 Ch. 143 - Heartfelt Cooking Lesson

    @Elhao Yeah I find this chapter a little iffy. I get the idea is he's "too survival oriented". But even with survival you don't use EVERYTHING. You still leave out the scraps and parts you can't eat or don't provide benefit and I don't think egg shells provide notable benefits that they are...
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    The Only "R" in the world - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Those that keep running

    @Crazyperson117 1.That's a good point although that more just reframes the issue rather than getting rid of it. The fact demons should not even be an issue with so many heroes killing everything they can for EXP means demons should be extinct except MAYBE those strong enough that only top...
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    The Only "R" in the world - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Those that keep running

    @Crazyperson117 What I meant was because the manga is trying to blend real world with gatcha game settings it would be better if each one was a "Sole hero" for each world as it would more naturally blend with Gatcha game logic. Because as it stands there are two major issues in the setting based...
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    The Only "R" in the world - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Those that keep running

    @Crazyperson117 "Dark Horror" was a typo. I meant "dark Humor". But it's attempt at dark humor causes it to fall into a middle ground between "cartoon logic" and "real logic" that just falls flat. Because it's trying to make humor by pointing how the logical flaws in various scenarios. But those...
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    Monster Partner of The Vast Sea of Trees - Vol. 2 Ch. 5 - The Glutton

    Still not completely sure how to feel about this one. It's clearly an Isekai that's trying it's hand at social commentary, kinda like that trash "Human Ranch" but unlike that mess this one is at least trying to tell a more logical story rather than just swapping animals with humans and ranches...
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    The Bloody Merchant Empress and the Cold Husband's Forceful Doting - Ch. 106 - Ye Yu

    On yeah what's his name likes the heroine ... My God this series lacks focus.
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    Human Ranch - Vol. 1 Ch. 6 - Elf

    @Flumflum yeah I gave this a glance just to see what they did with the concept but it feels like something PETA would release. A vague attempt to showcase cruelty of livestock without taking into account the fundemental differences between a human and a cow. It's just pure horror based on a...
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    Kuchi ga Saketemo Kimi ni wa (2020 Short) - Ch. 3

    BTW if I had to make any major critics (as in reasons I think this didn't get realized it would be the following) 1. The backstory for the MC's attraction to Waifu feels rather shallow. Some kid picks a fight with him because he's jealous of his rich family and arrogant attitude even though...
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    Kuchi ga Saketemo Kimi ni wa (2020 Short) - Ch. 3

    THis wasn't an axe guys. This was a SHORT STORY. Perhaps designed as a pilot in hopes of launching a full serialization but still this wasn't axed off it lacked the funding from the start to be especially long. Given it's open ended nature I feel this was most likely designed as a pilot and the...
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    Jitsu wa Ore, Saikyou Deshita? - Vol. 3 Ch. 17.2 - By The Lake (Part 2)

    THis whole "Clone" thing has gotten stupid. He's just supposed to be a fake made of barrier magic. A good fake but still just something made to take the MC's place. Why is IT this smart? Why is it able to defy the MC and refuse orders? That's like Naruto's shadow clones refusing to jump into...
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    Loli Hero and Demon Lord - Ch. 1

    @XaneKudo I wasn't trying to be serious just honest. This just felt so uninspired and boring. Sure it was cute but even the cuteness wasn't that big a deal and could have been done alot better. It's not even a new concept it's been done already.
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    Loli Hero and Demon Lord - Ch. 1

    I"m sorry but this was just pointless. I"m all for "Cuteness conquers all" but if you want to stand out you need to at least try to write something coherent. How did a 6 year old child even get into the Demon King's castle? Why did the 8 year old demon lord not have a SINGLE GUARD!?! What...
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