Curious why you left out the bit about the 14 hunters being flame/magma types... and why on the plane you worded it to seem like he was begging for him to stop... versus telling his men to do nothing.
Still it's the best translation thus far.
Interesting... the mech started talking. I'm hoping we start to learn more about the Del soon and hopefully repair what has been broken this entire time.
I've followed this since the beginning and I'm really not sure if it's the writer or translator... but somewhere around midways through this became very difficult to follow.