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Good progress, but you need to translate the text outside of the bubbles as well. It's helpful for the readers. You can leave the SFX alone for now.

pg1 appears to be missing some text in the bubbles, top-left.

Pg 5, missing CLRD and TS.

Thanks for another chapter. Some feedback, SFX is all-or-nothing. When it's done partially, it's a bit jarring to read.

Mistake on pg 2-3, it's a double-spread so they need to be stitched side-by-side.

Typo on page 8 bottom right, should say streams dance not "stream dance".

Missing SFX TL/TS on page 6.

That last page...

Thanks for the translation! The translation is a bit rough in some places, and some of the text isn't CLRD properly. If you need help, I'm happy to take a look.

Missing SFX CLRD/TL on page 3 and page 10, should say RUMBLING or something along those lines. Missing CLRD/TL in some of the boxes on page 10. There's also some minor grammar/punctuation issues here and there.

Typo on page 2, should say most of the time, not "most the time".

Typo on page 8, should not "shoild"

Typo on page 2, should say sexy not "sex".

Pg 9 typo, Yumeji's name is misspelled.

Pg 2, missing SFX CLRD/TL on bottom.

Pg 25, missing SFX TL/TS

Pg 17, should say understand not 'undestand'

Someone needs to get Guillermo del Toro on the line

There's an error with page 10 and 11, it's a double-spread so they should be stitched together horizontally. That way people using "single-page" mode can see double-spreads properly.