Those people who say translation is bad definitely have rotten brain or eyes. They can try themselves what truly MTL is, I tried it once and it's pretty horrible. It a lot headache to read it and fix to point readable.
It's just end like that? honestly concept is interesting, moreover art is quite good. Unfortunately it's seems author seems don't have idea how to create story, so it's just create this whole seven page which seems short preview/prologue.
Ugh... sorry... somehow I can't force myself read this story anymore. That system force MC too much, basically it just want some puppet who goes with original.