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"For the massacre of those elves in the fortress." Correct me if I'm wrong because I only started reading this again after a long hiatus, but all the elves in that fortress were armed, right? It's not a war crime to attack and kill armed combatants, which presumably would include every last elf...

Forget the retarded author controversy. I can barely stand to even read this chapter because of all the stupid grammatical errors. TL;DR This group's proofreader seems to be quite bad at what they do. P.S. "Then, so you that can do it in a little better mood and place next time..." Mixed up...

@Madologist "Maximum HAREM and then few generations of half-siblings porking half-siblings (and some of them prolly porking the dad-MC too) later, the village becomes the fantasy equivalent of Deliverance inbred village and that is when the TRUE story kicks in. A tale of horror and tragedy...

I'd be happy to volunteer as a proofreader. As a plus, I can also understand Japanese to a certain extent, so in the process of proofreading I can, at the same time, check the translation and make sure that any proofreading modifications I might make will appropriately match the original...

This is so BS. Even with the "big reveal," it's still not explained how on Earth (1) Lilia is visible only to Youta and (2) how she can teleport over short distances within his original world. And of course, (3) how she got to Earth in the first place and found him so accurately (in chapter...

The main problem with bringing any one of them out of the game and into reality is that he will no longer have any access to the game features which have so far allowed him to survive his encounters with each of these psycho ladies. Meanwhile, sword-assassin will still have inhuman sword skills...

"But I just saw her jumped over this wall and went inside." Oh FFS, English tenses aren't that difficult. I wish so-called "translators" would actually learn basic grammar before they try to translate into English. And that wasn't the only mistake, but it was the most glaring error.

A few of you need to pay better attention. One year is the total amount of time he has to achieve the game's goal. Not a year per assault. And the time continues to elapse even when he "goes back in time" with a reload. And if you'll notice, the time has not, at any point, reset to 8760, even...

The truly stupid part is that this guy is dropping so much money on items through the game's interface when he could buy them for a mere fraction of the price via other sources.?

"All he had to do was go to the bar she was going to go to and hit on her. But this guy isn't very fucking smart" LOL Well, to be fair to the guy, the game says he needs to "assault," not "go pick up some ladies at the bar with some booze and smooth talk," so I'd say it's partly the fault of...

Fuko - "I feel like it is not his brother but himself" At first, I thought it was the schoolgirl. But after this chapter, as I was reading, I now view the younger brother as the likely creator of the delusion. So I have to agree with you, Fuko. I think he too quickly ruled out "himself" as the...

The girl under his left arm looks way too young. (lol) In any case, Kiriha best girl always.

For what's it's worth, I preferred sensei's original face. The drawing style transformed her into a generic moé-blob.

@sonyalexandra "Doraim has 4 siblings, that's too much for low birth." But the dragons have extreme longevity. Even if they bear only one child every one or two centuries, they can eventually make a family that large.

I'm kind of not liking the way the author has gradually transformed the art style of sensei's face. It feels to me like she is becoming a generic-ish moé-blob character with large, circular eyes and overly cutesy face. It gives me the impression that too many of her edges are being softened...

@Gcnx1234 I looked at the RAW and the line was 俺の身長の２倍以上あるな Which could be translated as: "It's at least twice my height." or "It's more than twice my height." Either way could be considered a "correct" translation of the Japanese line into English. Although in this case, I have to admit the...

LOL This is turning so chuunibyou. And as a result, it's becoming more and more difficult to take it even remotely seriously. "I gotta have mah dark tattered cloak, and mah glowing red eyes. Oh no, stay back! I can't control teh powerz sealed within me!" Randomly shouts, "Starvation BOOST!" and...

Peter's peter is in peril.

That old guy, Albatross, looks like he's over eighty. Did he impregnate his wife when he was 65 years old? He looks more like Luvelia's grandfather, or even great-grandfather, rather than her father. I think I'll nickname him "Zombie Face Dad" in my head while I read. ?

@ mahtan The plural of elf is elves. It is not, nor has it ever been, elfs. Commentary on the chapter: