Idk if it's the angle, the artist messed up, or she's always been that way, but the panel when she pushed him down makes her look a lot smaller than him. Like a child on top of an adult.
Since some of you are saying stuff like "the story took a turn" or "it's going down hill", I hope you all realize this is the... non hentai version of the hentai from the same author.
Am I the only one that doesn't see a problem with the translation? Is it the grammar or something, because I didn't see any problems. Or am I just too used to broken English?