It might just be the bad translation, but this reads like it was written by someone in her early teens. The characters' internal logic and the comedic timing have that feel to them.
Everybody's expecting it to be Nine in the box, but I suspect it's actually Yona. The items are supposed to be bought, after all; Yona is paid to work for Melissa, and she recently received a raise extravagant enough to make Melissa's father's jaw drop.
"Also, I can use it to track you down if you're ever in danger," is pretty obviously what he stopped himself from saying. Always the same with these male leads, installing tracking devices on the objects of their obsession, er, affection.
...From the way the facial expressions sit on the faces, I'm convinced that the artist draws them in after the lines are finalized and everything instead of during the sketching phase, or maybe pastes them in using software. The angles are just slightly off from where they should be.
It's...
What kinda dumbo uses a potion that has a skull and crossbones painted on it? Actually, what kind of scammer jeopardizes their operation by painting a skull and crossbones on their potions tubes in the first place?! Sheesh.
The text is really hard to parse in some places due to the way you're separating the words. This guide (and the chapter following it) have helpful advice in regards to lining and dividing up text.
@sirflimflam The high horse of somebody clinging desperately to whatever's giving them a sense of...
Peacock kind of shot himself in the foot with that premise. Melissa can condemn him for insincerity and false flattery if whatever he picks doesn't derive its value from its relationship to Yuri. Surely the most expensive dress in the land is less valuable than a dress worn by her, so the logic...
If Ji-tae was going to stay off his rocker for the rest of the story, his mental break would have been framed in a positive light. A wake-up call to the cruel realities of the world, or a determined vow to Become Strong No Matter What Evils I Must Commit. (That’s how the traditional edgelord...
I dunno about you guys, but I wouldn't want to be her patient. Getting sexually excited while, say, holding a drill near somebody's delicate gums seems like a recipe for disaster.
A No-Face costume....is that a lazy person's Halloween costume in Japan, I wonder? The mask is pretty simple and other than that it's basically a sheet ghost.
Well...it's filled with the boys'-club sexism and grandiose "society doesn't value us but the geek shall inherit the earth" preoccupation that IT guys and the weedy nerds of yesteryear have always been known for, but the main character is interesting.
Did the story mention that jasmine tea is part of isekai not-China's cuisine before, or is she just assuming that the country is a perfect analogue to China? I can't remember and I don't feel like rereading to find out.