@DarkLegions
Yes, that was signaled on LHT website yesterday, I see it's the same here.
From the page borders, I think we are missing what should have been pages 17 and 19.
PS: confirmed
https://loveheaven.net/read-jaryuu-tensei-raw-chapter-30.html
I agree, this translation makes it a lot more comprehensible.
Quite a few (lot) of sentences didn't make sense before, like the "uncle hero", or with the "you mean you wote it based on your father's actual experience" I thought that was implying the grandfather.
Thanks guys.