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  1. PaterFrog

    Bring the Love - Ch. 41 - Season 2 Premiere

    What was the actual term little brother used for big brother there? Generally speaking, you can use the original terms. If you think something isn't clear, you can always add a T/N. But the majority of readers will be well familiar with the Japanese and Korean titles and their derivatives, and...
  2. PaterFrog

    Bring the Love - Ch. 28

    Shouldn't the note say "Leah Fatale" instead?
  3. PaterFrog

    Bring the Love - Ch. 1

    "beautiful women with strong heretics"? Typo?
  4. PaterFrog

    Daites Ryou Koubouki - Ch. 13

    @labanina Sure, I'll send you a PM with my discord. Aside from that, why are you unwilling to look for a proofreader? I mean, the entire purpose of the manga is for readers to get immersed. Typos, bad grammar, and such are obviously going to rip them out of it. It's like having taken great care...
  5. PaterFrog

    Daites Ryou Koubouki - Ch. 13

    Thanks for the update, but please have somebody proofread it?
  6. PaterFrog

    Kuma Kuma Kuma Bear - Vol. 6 Ch. 53

    You seriously need a proofreader.
  7. PaterFrog

    Kuma Kuma Kuma Bear - Vol. 5 Ch. 41

    If you know you fail at grammar, then get a proper English-speaking proofreader!
  8. PaterFrog

    God of Martial Arts - Ch. 123.1 - Kill me and see!

    Why are we missing the chapters in between? Actually missing chapters, or just a typo of some kind?
  9. PaterFrog

    Kuma Kuma Kuma Bear - Vol. 2 Ch. 13

    Argh, wtf is that summon? Don't give it human eyes FFS. Uncanny valley in full force.
  10. PaterFrog

    1060061

    Urgh, this font is terrible to read. XD Just use the same one of the previous chapters.^^
  11. PaterFrog

    Ore no Ie ga Maryoku Spot datta Ken: Sundeiru dake de Sekai Saikyou - Vol. 4 Ch. 41

    "Full steam ahead!" "Full steam ahead, sir!" "Deploy airbags!" "Airbags deployed, sir!" "BRACE FOR IMPACT! BRACE FOR IMPACT! BRACE FOR IMPACT!"
  12. PaterFrog

    Ore no Ie ga Maryoku Spot datta Ken: Sundeiru dake de Sekai Saikyou - Vol. 4 Ch. 39

    She has the VSHTM installed. Variable Size Hydraulic Titties Module.
  13. PaterFrog

    Housekeeper - Vol. 1 Ch. 30

    Whelp, this needs some fucking proofreading.
  14. PaterFrog

    Fire Force - Vol. 2 Ch. 13 - Standby

    I kinda doubt that an explosion reduced to non-lethal levels is enough to actually rack the slide of a gun for the next shot...
  15. PaterFrog

    Yasei no Last Boss ga Arawareta! - Vol. 2 Ch. 9 - Recovery

    Whelp, combined with the far too obvious silhouette from a few chapters ago when she killed that mob of a demon, I'm about 90% certain that Diina was never a thing and is instead capable of altering the memory of anybody and anything to include her in some vague fashion in their past. So she's...
  16. PaterFrog

    Yasei no Last Boss ga Arawareta! - Vol. 2 Ch. 8 - Exploration

    So many typos, no proofreading I guess?
  17. PaterFrog

    God of Martial Arts - Vol. 1 Ch. 84.2 - Killing Move(2)

    I actually quite like "Everfrost". I would even go so far as to simply exclude the "World of" and use only "Everfrost". It flows so much better.
  18. PaterFrog

    God of Martial Arts - Vol. 1 Ch. 53.1 - Cold-Blooded Murderer 1

    Page 7 and onward are terrible for expression. Having the MC wear that "mask" was an absolutely idiotic decision by the author. It instantly removed all tension from him. What were they thinking?!
  19. PaterFrog

    God of Martial Arts - Vol. 1 Ch. 28.2 - A Fierce Tiger (2)

    @StarGasm Very true. I love books, they leave most things up to your imagination, so it's very easy to imagine looks, movements, and expressions freely.
  20. PaterFrog

    Game of Familia: Kazoku Senki - Vol. 6 Ch. 25 - Disadvantage of a Wise One

    It seems like this chapter may have a ton of typos and repetitions. Did you maybe forget to proofread it?
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