@mrj224
I tought that the party was suspicious too, not design-wise but from how they first "accidentaly?" met and how they do 110% effort and excuses just to stick to arito's ass.
Unless....they're on a mission to find and secure a fallen, and they know the method to identify one.
Or
They're...
Tech sharing isekai like this is so hard to stomach, I always imagine millions old tech labor/businessman and their fam went under cos this bloke warp in and go all "abracadabra! Here, i give yu magical stuff for free,kumbaya!"
Artstyle that suit better in a children picture book.
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Mediocre life story about some gay dude that selling his body.
Is a bad mix, unless you're aiming to make a children picture book...for gay papa and son?
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Kinda felt he contradicts himself as being a wise dude...but haven't settle...
Ojisan null mage :"Wrong knowledge is wildly spreading."
Happy Archmage:"That mage know, Shut it down!"
Pretty good, would love to get more backstory about he and his fam tho.