@orangescans if you only add information about you to the first page without translating it wouldn't it be easy for someone else to just replace it with a raw page? btw great work with backgrounds of the text without speech bubbles like on page 12, I've no idea how you do it.
They are both unbearable crybabies. But if the protagonist had no character change from the beginning and if your remove the "I'm always thinking about that kind of thing..." reply, he'd be basically me.