Really good and not too "pushy" with the cliché but I left when the two spent their first night together.
Just a personal issue, I don't like it so I had to stop reading. I'm not here to suffer x)
Feel single enough.
The author is using to much the cliches and the popular storytelling style that he is lacking in something...
It's fast and it looks like the author is "lazy" (I know it's hard work).